BEACH TWIST!!!!

BRAIN STORM]:

1.character Freddie  the closest man

2.character at the far end is Jack

3&4.characters  at the right corner of the beach,Sandy the women and Sam the man

5. at the beach on a sunny day

6.just came back from fishing on the side of the beach with the bait inside the empty cans

7. twist to the story

STORY]:

  Getting of the van out on the beach we got our stuff at the back boot and put the gear out on the sand.

“I'm going to have a little dip in the sea”. Jack said excitedly.

“OK then don’t take for long we will be fishing in 5 minutes”.Said Freddie.

“OK then”.Said Jack rushing to the sea and then splash, splash Jack was everywhere here ,there, here and there.

“We're going to have little swim too”. Sam and Sandy said

.“Be back in 5 minutes then guys”. Said Freddie again.

“I’ll just stay here and get all of the stuff ready”. Talking to myself Freddie as I was busy. 5 minutes later.

“Guys come now”.Freddie yelled out.Picking up all of the equipment and taking them all down to the edge of the water placing them down and getting the fishing rods out they all got the bait and put it on the end of the hook. throwing the lines out to sea the seawater went straight out and there was not any water then Jack clicked,

“um guys are you thinking what I'm thinking”. Jack said while he was shaking. Everybody ran and left all of the stuff and ran for their life got in the van turned on the radio and heard that there is going to be a tsunami. TO BE CONTINUED…….