Admiring the thousands of flowers in the forest little Red suddenly was staring into the eyes of a fearless wolf. In a Deep voice the Wolf said, “Hello Where are you off to?”.
“I am on my way to the bakery for a cheese cake to eat at grannies at lunch” Little Red replied.
“May I help you get it and travel to your granny's safely”. Don’t you know that the forest is a dangerous place. The wolf said.
“Okay” Little Red answered back. `
“Where about does your granny live?” The wolf desperately replied. “It is the first house on the left”. So they set off into the jungle.
Hi TJ,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a good piece of writing and is certainly a great start to your fairytale. If you decide to add more to it I believe it will be an even better piece of writing it terms of an ending.
Good Work.