BEACH TWIST!!!!

BRAIN STORM]:

1.character Freddie  the closest man

2.character at the far end is Jack

3&4.characters  at the right corner of the beach,Sandy the women and Sam the man

5. at the beach on a sunny day

6.just came back from fishing on the side of the beach with the bait inside the empty cans

7. twist to the story

STORY]:

  Getting of the van out on the beach we got our stuff at the back boot and put the gear out on the sand.

“I'm going to have a little dip in the sea”. Jack said excitedly.

“OK then don’t take for long we will be fishing in 5 minutes”.Said Freddie.

“OK then”.Said Jack rushing to the sea and then splash, splash Jack was everywhere here ,there, here and there.

“We're going to have little swim too”. Sam and Sandy said

.“Be back in 5 minutes then guys”. Said Freddie again.

“I’ll just stay here and get all of the stuff ready”. Talking to myself Freddie as I was busy. 5 minutes later.

“Guys come now”.Freddie yelled out.Picking up all of the equipment and taking them all down to the edge of the water placing them down and getting the fishing rods out they all got the bait and put it on the end of the hook. throwing the lines out to sea the seawater went straight out and there was not any water then Jack clicked,

“um guys are you thinking what I'm thinking”. Jack said while he was shaking. Everybody ran and left all of the stuff and ran for their life got in the van turned on the radio and heard that there is going to be a tsunami. TO BE CONTINUED…….

FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL 2...

PLANNING...

1. teachers name Mrs peterson kind of grumpy

1. best friend was Mohammed

1.school ruapotaka

1.first class was room 1

MY FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL…

  Walking nervously into my first classroom I was scared because my mum and dad had left me. All the kids were staring  at me like I was a lollipop, while I went to the front of the class and stood there. I was shaking like a little chiwawa. My teacher Mrs Peterson was kind to me at the start of my first day and said to me

“What is your name?”

 “My name is Tasesa”, I replied In a squeaky voice.  .

“Everyone this is Tasesa”. My teacher said.

“Hello Tasesa”. All the children said while I was walking across the room.

I said to myself “I don't want to stay here i want to go home with my mum and dad”. I said.

As I sat down on the mat a few kids looked at me so I looked at the ground as if I didn't know were I was. As my teacher walked across the room over to the white-board she said every ones names that were at school today in my classroom. She talked louder than I had ever imagined. When she was done doing that the bell rang like there was a burglar trying to steal something from my school.

“Morning tea time everyone”. my teacher said I a joyful way.

So we all got up and went over to our launch box to get a snack to eat. Walking outside there was a heap of people walking all over the place just like a pile of ants scattered around the place.

As I sat down on the brown, wood bench in front of my classroom I saw my older brother hanging out with his friends. He was enjoying it. While i was eating my morning tea 3 boys came over to me and said “Hey tasesa do you want to be my friend”. “OK I nervously said”.

So I went of and played with them. So that was my first day at school and it was great.

TO BE CONTINUED…….

Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day of. From looking at our writing we are going to set some writing goals for the term.

My first day at school.....

MY FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL…

  Walking into my first classroom I was scared because my mum and dad left me. All the kids staring  at me while I went to the front of the class and stood there. My teacher said to me “What is your name”.  “My name is Tasesa”.  “Everyone this is Tasesa”. “Hello Tasesa”. Walking across the room I said to myself “I don't want to stay here I want to go home with my mum and dad”.  As I sat down on the mat a few kids looked at me so I looked at the ground as if I didn't know were I was. As my teacher walked across the room over to the white-board she said everyone's names that were at school today in my classroom. She talked louder then i had ever imagined. When she finish doing that the bell rang like there was a burglar trying to steal something from my school. “Morning tea time everyone” my teacher said I a joyful way so we all got up and went over to our launch box to get a snack to eat. Walking outside there was a heap of people walking all over the place just like a pile of ants scattered around the place.

 As I sat down on the brown, wood bench in front of my classroom I saw my older brother hanging out with his friends. He was enjoying it. While i was eating my morning tea 3 boys came over to me and said “Hey Tasesa do you want to be my friend”. “OK I nervously said”. So I went of and played with them. So that was my first day at school and it was great.

TO BE CONTINUED…….

Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day of. From looking at our writing we are going to set some writing goals for the term.

All Blacks

Coming out to the field having a little fiddle with their bodies to keep them warm. Then getting into the line for the New Zealand national anthem. After the national anthem the All Blacks got ready to do the Haka.  Putting all their heart and soul into the haka. Getting ready to kick off to the Ozzies they started to chase the ball down the field as the ball was still in the air.

As the ball was coming down the All blacks were ready to tackle.Getting one penalty the Australians took the three points with Qait Cupar kicking at the posts. He gets it in, straight down the middle of the poasts. Again the All blacks kicked off. This time the All blacks got the ball of their own kick off.

Going into the second half of the game the All blacks were leading by miles until Australia gotta try.

The try came of Ashlee Cupar with a try in the left corner of the field. It was a lucky try. Qait got the conversion in.

He was on fire. The All blacks didn’t give up yet getting another try. in the last 10 to 20 mins. Then the Horn went of, the All Blacks won. They are unstoppable and impossible to beat in a game of rugby.  

Levi and Tj StoryBoard

When I Tj walk into a room and see a play dough and started making a chair with the play dough.When I was done I looked around the room for a sec then tuned around my chair i made out of play dough was a real chair.