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Friday 27 September 2013

THE BEACH.....


THE BEACH…

1)  Standing on the sand my feet start  to sink like I am in quicksand so I start walking.  2) As I  walk across the beach I look around and see the ocean water crashing onto the side of the rock edge like the ocean water was trying to break thru.3) Breathing in the air I smell a pinch of burgers from a nearby picnic.4) feeling the ocean water as I walk along the side of the beach like I was in a pile of wet  cloths.5) Watching the 7 kids enjoying themselves just like the seven dwarfs.6) Walking across the sand my feet starting to burn as I turn back and ran like a van.7) Sun was coming down and time to go home to eat cooked meat.

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my feet start to burn as I turn.

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watching the 7 kids enjoying themselves just like the seven dwarfs.

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in the air I smell a pinch of burgers from a nearby picnic.

Monday 16 September 2013

THE ALL B LACKS GAME AT EDEN PARK!!!!


AT  THE  ALL BLACKS GAME  IN EDEN  PARK!!!!

When we got in the Eden Park Stadium I had to stay in a group with my Coach, Mateo, Oliva, Girius, Sionekau and his little brother. And his mum and uncle were with us too. Trying to find our way through the large amount of the crowds of supporters from  the AB’s and the SA. It took us quite a while to find where we were looking for.

Finally we found the place where we were suppose to go. Sitting down on our sets Waiting for the game to start.Then come out the All Blacks everyone was screaming like the world was going to end. All the fireworks bursting out with large amounts of  gunpowder Exploding here, there and everywhere.

Starting the Haka. The All Blacks get aggressive to start of  the game off. The game was one of my favourite games of the year. Keiren Reid got 2 tries, Broudy Routalic got 1 try and Sam Cane got 1 try too . 4 conversions missed 1 penalty AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST THE ALL BLACKS WON!!!!